haha, i had this whole long critique written out and i accidentally clicked on an image and lost it all...lets see if i can do it again
k, so, the arms dont seem like they belong to this character. they are very sleek and sharp where the rest of the body is very organic. you did something that is very common "i still do it" where you start off really strong in the core and it looks sweet, but you lose steam as you go out on the limbs. the hands and feet lack the detail or any sculpting making them stand out a bit. "i got called out a lot on old portfolios for this" your color scheme is really cool. it pops different pieces away from the model which is really good and keeps the eye moviing. you need to go in and sharpen up your transitions though. if 2 colors are meeting, dont just blend them, intersect them with some sort of pattern. like the navy blue fading to the pink doesnt really work for me. those should have some sort of crisp difference between the 2.
haha, i had this whole long critique written out and i accidentally clicked on an image and lost it all...lets see if i can do it again
ReplyDeletek, so, the arms dont seem like they belong to this character. they are very sleek and sharp where the rest of the body is very organic. you did something that is very common "i still do it" where you start off really strong in the core and it looks sweet, but you lose steam as you go out on the limbs. the hands and feet lack the detail or any sculpting making them stand out a bit. "i got called out a lot on old portfolios for this" your color scheme is really cool. it pops different pieces away from the model which is really good and keeps the eye moviing. you need to go in and sharpen up your transitions though. if 2 colors are meeting, dont just blend them, intersect them with some sort of pattern. like the navy blue fading to the pink doesnt really work for me. those should have some sort of crisp difference between the 2.